Play With Me
Play With MeGaze into the water,bathe here in the stream.Play with me today now,down among the trees.Look upon the blue sky,shapes there in the clouds.Resting in the meadow,follow them around.Touching...
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This is beautiful Barry. I could visualize this scene so perfectly! Very well written.JanPlease join me at The Poetry Factory or view my personal webpage at Poems For The Heart and Soul
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Thanks! One of my first ventures without rhyme...It felt a little strange. BarryWe don't see things as they are, we see things as we are. - Anais Nin
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I can understand that. WHen one is used to writing poetry in rhyme it does seem a little strange to write without it. If you still adhere to a rythme even without rhyme, then it feels a little easier....
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Fide,Thank you for loooking and the nice comment. I'm glad you enjoyed. BarryWe don't see things as they are, we see things as we are. - Anais Nin
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a very good poem with wonderful visuals!Rene'Sweet Verse Poetry ForumTo Know me is to Love ME~~Everything in My Presence Becomes Sweeter~~@2001 copyright bySweet Verse &R.Reyes,Esq
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Thank you, Rene'!BarryWe don't see things as they are, we see things as we are. - Anais Nin
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I like this. The poem flowed off the tongue. No twisting of words here. Thanks for the great read. Tim
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